OktoPianist's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Despair]

Nice bro really, why don't you add some modulations or make instruments play with more extension? Cool, you're really into cool melodies and conception of sound, right? Just try to add my few suggestions to your work!

DarkV66 responds:

Usually I'm just too lazy for modulations :D

[Mesage - Stars]

Just try to abuse the concept of instrumental extension and change tonality a lot could make you discover interesting things.

Mesage responds:

this song is old, newer ones like synth-etic are way better

[2222*2]

Nice composing ability. Try to experiment a little bit more with tonality, rhythm, extreme and extreme variation. Let's say, to be more brave. Don't fear to excape from the material already in use. Just exagerate it. With your ability in composing, you have all the potential to risk something.

Mesage responds:

I will try

[creepy beat]

This is nice. I kinda like to collaborate, from this track I can perceive your experimental attitude to sound. You are not fixed onto a genre and this is enthusiasming. I like the beat, could not change or add something.

[Tuesday's Gone]

I like that :-)

[Storybook World - Nickelodeon All-Star Brawl 2]

Very cool and very fun music! Reminds me of something like donkey Kong game series. With a bit of jazz on it. Well imo the most valuable characteristic of the piece it's orchestrati in, so full of colours and complexity even with a bunch of electronic instruments! I am somehow curious about how you compose that. Everytime I feel so much stressed about how to combine many sound or melodies together. If I can give an advice, however, I would like this piece to have one point where it stops, or goes into a slightly different mood. This could be unnecessary, depending on the use you might want to do of this piece.